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五.写作
范文:
Nowadays, more and more middle school students get pocket money from their parents. For my part, we students should have some pocket money. However, we must spend it wisely.
I have pocket money as well. Usually, I spend most of my pocket money in buying books, for the reason that I am interested in reading. And I spend some money on daily use. You know, sometimes I'd like to hang out with my friends.
But how can we manage our pocket money better? Here is my advice: on one hand, we'd better make a plan at the beginning of the month. On the other hand, it is important for us to save a proper amount of money each month. As long as you do like this, I believe you can manage pocket money better.
A. 话题:观点建议类,中学生零花钱
B. 要点及时态
1. 观点:学生该不该有零花钱
2. 平常你的零花钱是如何花的
3. 建议:如何更好地管理零花钱
时态:主要是一般现在时
C. 范文分析
1. 结构完整,要点齐全。
2. Nowadays, more and more middle school students get pocket money from their parents. For my part, we students should have some pocket money. 指出当前存在的现象,紧接着表明观点;
3. However, we must spend it wisely. 过渡句,引出下文;
4. I have pocket money as well, 注意"也"的各种表达方式;
5. I spend most of my pocket money in buying books, for the reason that I am interested in reading. 句型spend...in doing sth. ;短语for the reason that"因为";
6. But how can we manage our pocket money better? Here is my advice. 一问一答,直接将问题摆出来,增加文章句式多样性;
7. on one hand, on the other hand,一方面,另一方面;
8. 句型we'd better do sth., it is important for sb. to do sth.
9. 结尾点题,句型as long as表示"只要……就"。
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